Monday, September 14, 2009

Fools Gold




Waiting for time to stop so I can breathe
Staring at the ring upon my finger
Typed papers that require my signature

14 comments:

Charles Gramlich said...

Wow, a lot of significance hidden in these lines.

Deb said...

Sounds like someone about to get married, at least this is how I felt before my big day. :)

Beautifully written and lots of hidden significance, as Charles said.

Monkey Man said...

Signed papers can sometimes set you free. Open your life. Allow you to move on. You give love whenever you write and wherever you go.
Soft love to you,
KP

RBroeker said...

Sometimes I feel like inundated, too. Very atmospheric.

Bestb wishes
Ralf

Timoteo said...

Every day CAN be a new beginning.

J. Andrew Lockhart said...

hmmmm. wondering....

Pete said...

remember everything is not a nail.
esp not your own feelings
take care

the walking man said...

Some papers are harder to get right before they are signed than others. Funny thing about signatures, the same one that can put years of debt on a person is also the same on that opens the door to freedom.

Janice Thomson said...

Divorce or marriage? Both require signatures. Like the wording in this - much to ponder...

Magyar said...

There is, T, something more to this. _m

__She... a prisoner to the ring and signature, gasps.

each breath
warmth to my frozen
dreams

Lou said...

Hmmm, this can invoke fear, uncertainty, hope, promise...lots of possibilities. Nice writing.

evilsquirrel01 said...

What beautiful words...thanks for sharing.

Sam!! said...

Beautiful words...

Take care

ivan said...

Oh that ring.
Ring of Fire.

Still burns.